Bad Character And Fitness Addendum
In Fall 2012, during my first semester of junior year, I was issued citations for “Possession of Alcohol by a Minor” and “Possession of Fraudulent Identification” from the Champaign County Police Department. As a result of these citations, my driving privileges were suspended for 12 months and I was issued a University Reprimand.
My experience profoundly affected my life. I reflected on how my poor life choices were jeopardizing my future aspirations and I decided I needed to make drastic changes in my life. Since then, I have devoted myself to improving my character and well-being; I removed negative influences and focused on my academic studies and extracurricular responsibilities. Though I sincerely remorse my past mistakes, I have grown tremendously as a result of my experience and I remain committed to bettering myself each day.
This is a good start, but I think you can improve it in a couple of ways:
1. Tell us more about the incident that led to the citation.
2. Be more specific about the changes you’ve made to your life since then.
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