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Friday, Apr 16 2021

@ Thank you very much for your admissions point of view. I will try to really narrow down the, "Why Law? Why Now? Why should we want you? Why do you want X School? What do you want a law degree for?" during my brainstorm and if I feel they are not compelling in comparison to what other students might be writing then I will reevaluate the topic. My GPA was not outstanding in undergrad, and since I've been in the workforce for a couple years, I feel my personal statement is going to be an important push in my application process. I really appreciate this guidance.

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Friday, Apr 16 2021

@ Thank you for your advice. I think I need to narrow down how the situation impacted my decisions pertaining to law today.

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Friday, Apr 16 2021

@ Thank you very much for your input. I am going to purchase the 7Sage admissions course to hopefully get some direction. I would absolutely read a copy of your statement if you are willing to share. I'm not sure if there is a private way to share it on here or if email would be better.

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Friday, Apr 16 2021

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Can a Personal Statement be too personal?

I am just beginning the brainstorm for my personal statement.

I want to write about a traumatic event from my childhood. Essentially when I was 7, my grandmother was killed in a hit and run accident. The person was never identified or convicted. My grandmother was an illegal immigrant from Mexico living in Chicago.

The reason I want to write about this topic is because it has shaped me out in every way, to be the person I am today. It forced me at young age to feel that sense of betrayal, anger and discrimination. Which as a young adult, those feelings drove me to study an undergraduate degree in International Business (focus in diversity and inclusion) because I never wanted anyone to feel what my family felt. Additionally, the situation has been a driver in my pursuit to study law because I always felt a sense of injustice with the situation.

I realize this entire explanation is very vague, and I am just beginning to truly piece the emotions with how they relate to my choices later in life but I am confident they are connected. I'm just wondering, before I really dive in, is this too personal? Is this not the route a personal statement is supposed to take?

I studied my undergrad degree for 3.5 years and graduated in Dec 2018. I have been in the workforce and at the same company for 2 years this April. So I am very open to any advice about applying to schools, studying and writing essays since I am a bit removed from the academic setting.

thank you!

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