Hey everyone,
For some reason I am extremely struggling with this one sentence in my personal statement
"However, what began as a slow entrance into addiction had now become full-fledged."
I absolutely HATE this sentence and was wondering if anyone had any advice?
Thank you so much
@ Thank you so much for your comment. I put the beginning of the paragraph in this comment so you can see what I am trying to get at.
"I remember my first real family emergency. It occurred in October of my second year of university. My fourteen-year-old brother received a letter at the door which stated our home was going into foreclosure, unless we paid in full the amount that was past due. My mother was always in charge of paying the bills and as the child, I felt secure with this arrangement. However, what began as a slow entrance into addiction had now become full-fledged. My mother was too deep in her addiction to pay the bills "
Please note this is very rough and not fully edited yet. Just the gist.