Hey 7Sagers,
Someone emailed in with a question I thought you could help out with! Here it is:
I recently started using 7Sage, and I am currently having difficulties with identifying embedded clauses, modifiers, details and predicates. I've gone over the lessons a few times and done the practice quiz. I am looking for some insight.
Comments
When I blow dry my hair before work I read over notes that I have made and I always make sure to go over embedded clauses.
The sentence "candidates who undertake expensive campaigns have an unfair advantage" (or something to that end) was given as an example in that lesson.
I always always always go over it and break it down. Maybe this will help you. Instead of just reading a sentence, spend some time breaking it into it's parts so you know how the words function together and why.
As you read:
candidates who undertake expensive campaigns have an unfair advantage
Think.
Subject. Candidates.
Predicate. Advantage.
What kind of candidates are they? The ones that undertake expensive campaigns. What kind of advantage is it? Unfair.
Unfair and "undertake expensive campaigns" just modify what you're talking about. Really spend time breaking it down and thinking about the sentence.
Here's another example I found on the web:
"As the leader of all illegal activities in Casablanca, I am an influential and respected man."
Think.
What kind of leader?..... one of all illegal activities in Casblanca. NOT just ANY leader. One of illegal activities in Casablanca.
What kind of man? Influential and respected.
I hope that helps. My suggestion would just look up some modifier grammar lessons and really just make your way through them. Start with simple, work up to difficult. Competency comes from practice. You can do it!
Modifiers, if I'm not mistaken, can modify any portion of the sentence.