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Mistakes on the First Sentence of Your Personal Statement

David BusisDavid Busis Member Moderator
in Law School Admissions 7317 karma

I just revised this old chestnut and thought I would share it. Here's the gist: you don't have to go for a knockout on your first sentence. It's okay to take it slow. No one will stop reading.

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  • Lolo1996Lolo1996 Member
    498 karma

    Super! Does 7sage have any resources for us to get our PS reviewed/corrected? Like tutors for this specifically, or peer-review matching etc.?

  • David BusisDavid Busis Member Moderator
    7317 karma

    We do! Https://7sage.com/admissions/enroll

  • Cant Get RightCant Get Right Yearly + Live Member Sage ⭐ 🍌 7Sage Tutor
    27884 karma

    I really hope this was prompted by someone submitting a PS beginning with a modification on a famous opening line.

    Call me Joshua.

    It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in the possession of a good fortune must be in want of a JD.

    George Washington University Law School, light of my life, fire of my loins.

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