Please correct the 3rd sentence in the "Deepen the phenomenon" section. It "But we're no longer to an explanation of why his clearance rate is less than half the average" is missing a word between "longer" and "to," such as "looking."

When you break down the Stoops's sentence, it would be better not to use "students" as one of the main concepts, since when you bring it back together students is in both concepts. It would be better to break that first main concept into "Mrs. Stoops's class."

On question 5, you write "an organization who." Organizations are not people, and should not be referred to using personal pronouns.

On question 1, your explanation uses the indicator "unless," but "without" was the indicator used in the sentence. Please fix.

This question still makes little sense the way A.J. explains it. He's speaking too fast. a) what type of question is it? b) can the video expand on the explanation or go slower? He explains as if we get it, and I don't.