@"Creasey LSAT" I want them to experience the story that I am telling the way that I felt and lived it. I want their perspective on the essay to change as my perspective on life changed.
@"Giant Panda" Yes, it's worth reading! It helped me better understand flaws in general and the RC sections helped as well. Definitely worth reading if you're still having trouble grasping something or if you just need a different perspective.