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same. I thought a broader conclusion would be that generally, there was some influence between the two...but maybe that would be unwarranted too because it could've been a spurious correlation in which they both independently constructed the tombs
I loved every moment of reading this. GOOD LUCK FAM!
AC D "this is a cookie cutter but not the cookie from which this argument is cut" LOL , I hope this gets out of my head for the next flaw question I see
#12 I think the support from D comes from the third paragraph where the author says "two beliefs underlie this shift..."
me too please
1. "grand theories"
Structure: Intro/context
Transition: why quotations around it? not as encompassing as it seems?
2. potential not achieved
Structure: discrepancy
Transition: solution?
3. appeal
Structure: why popular
Transition: solution
4. potential solution
Structure: MP
1. steele confirmation?
2. how?
3. virus transmission
4. signature | OPA
TIME (Passage - 3:19)
BLIND REVIEW
1. Steele's immune mechanism
Structure: context/MP
Transition: more details about the mechanism steele claims to help support L's theory
2. R-DNA mutation
Structure: OPA Premise
Transition: how does this mutation figure into L's hypo?
3. virus transmission hypo
Structure: OPA support
Transition: plausible? APOV
4. patterns evidence | opposition
Structure: OPA conclusion/opposition
Very difficult for me to see a cookie cutter structure here
TIME: (Passages - 3:51)
BLIND REVIEW
1. shift - gender relations
Structure: change/shift in history | context
Transition: examples or support as to how this was produced in historical study/impact
2. impact today
Structure: impact
Transition: good/bad?
3. obscurity of gender
Structure: APOV/MP
B
1. A's laws
Stucture: context
Transition: impact
2. successful
Structure: more contextual details
Transition: relevance today?
3. momentum in art
Structure: more details
1. question - OPA cost benefit
2. morality factors
3. impractical - detection ratio
4. reconsider both
TIME: (Passage - 3:19)
BLIND REVIEW
1. question | OPA - penalty over profit
Structure: rhetorical question | OPA explanation
Transition A POV disagree
2. earnings over morality
Structure: OPA contd.
Transition: discrepancy/issue with OPA
3. consequence - detection ratio
Structure: discrepancy/issue
Transition: APOV/solution
4. alternate needed
Structure: APOV
1. FTP importance: Negro Units
2. diversity from debate
3. MP - impact
TIME: (Passage - 3:47)
BLIND REVIEW
1. FTP Negro Units
Structure: context/intro to key episode in history
Transition: more details into why important/impact at the time
2. diversity of production
Structure: details on what characterized the episode from its foundation to characteristics
Transition: APOV on why important in context of FTP broadly
3. impact
Structure: impact
TIME: 11 mins 17 secs (Passage - 3:53)
1. N.E. theory
Structure: intro/context to approach | theory defined
Transition: APOV. good?
2. A not B (not sufficient)
Structure: MP
TIME: 8 mins 05 secs (Passage - 3:39)
1. MP
Structure: context/MP
Transition: details regarding development
2. religious to political transition
Structure: premise/support
Transition: examples of political messages
3. foundation solidified
Structure: support/premise
TIME: 7 mins 43 secs
1. legal issue/question
Structure: question/issue introduced
Transition: what makes the opposition think patents are hindering basic research? reasoning
2. hindrance/threat
Structure: issue explained further/OPA
Transition: is fear unfounded? APOV
3. unfounded fear
Structure: MP
TIME: 7 mins 55 secs (Passage: 3:48)
1. quote
Structure: intro
Transition: who's saying this and why?
2. source
Structure: context/background info
Transition: why criticism of supposed legend? is criticism appropriate?
3. controversy
Structure: context/background info
Transition: did S. achieve later praise likewise?
4. S.'s representative styles, #1
Structure: APOV
Transition: #2 style
5. no tone
Structure: premise
Transition: #3?
6. 12-tone
Structure: PREMISE
Transition: MP
7. why deserving praise
Structure: MP
1. P's hypo & resistance
Structure: context
Transition: why did they resist? OPA?
2. OPA | discrepancy
Structure: OPA| discrepancy
Transition: how did P. go about challenging? what evidence?
3. P's challenge | rebuttal
Structure: new view/OPA rebuttal
Transition: P's response
4. nuclear reaction expl.
Structure: reason for long-held resistance
1. deeper representation of self
Structure: Context/MP
Transition: "theme throughout career" flesh out how career works signify this theme, delve into previous emblematic works
2. eg. S.M.
Structure: support/premise
Transition: other works as examples
3. eg. Manhattan
Structure: Premise/support
Transition: other example
4. less artististic > more ...
Structure: support/premise
1. N.Z. decline
Structure: phen/shift - source/consequences of change
Transition: impact/potential solution
2. potential solution - model strategies
Structure: potential solution/APOV
Transition: feasible? method? what exactly are their strategies?
3. division
Structure: discrepancy/crux of issue
Transition: how does potential solution resolve?
4. CGR
Structure: method/MP
1. M.G. hypo | flawed
Structure: intro/MP
Transition: details on flaws
2. consensus agenda
Structure: support/premise
Transition: Flaw #2
3. views representative?
Structure: support/premise
1. stealing thunder strategy
Structure: intro to idea/practice
Transition: importance?
2. effective
Structure: MP - premise
Transition: but...
3. "spin" - pro/drawback
premise
1. why not perfume?
Structure: rhet. question/phen
Transition: explanation?
2. parallels - art
Structure: context/deepens paradox
Transition: explanation?
3. contd. - perfumers
Structure: contd. context
Transition: explanation
4. profit interests - answer
Structure: MP/possible explanation
TOTAL TIME: 8 mins 04 secs (Passage - 3:45)
1. Complex balance
2. analogy - language
3. continuous - relaxing
BLIND REVIEW
1. complex-organized balance
Structure: MP
Transition: support...examples in music
2. analogy - language
Structure: support for idea of complexity being essential
Transition: more support
3. continuous = relax!
Structure: support for coherence being essential
Cookie Cutter - to persuade, hypothesis - support?
1. natural selection S.C.
2. discrepancy
3. eg. random neutral mutations
4. eg. dinosaurs
Passage - 3:50 = 7 mins 54 secs
BLIND REVIEW
1. OPA - natural selection
Structure: OPA / context
Transition: A POV wrong
2. discrepancy
Structure: MP
Transition: Support? Examples in nature?
3. neutral adaptations
Structure: support - part 1 of MP
Transition: implications
4. nonconforming eg. - dinosaurs
Structure: support - part 2 of MP
1. lack of definition
2. ROMA
BLIND REVIEW
1. lack of definition
Structure: context/background info
Transition: issue? why is this the state of affairs?
2. problematic - ROMA
Structure: discrepancy.issue with traditional approach or definition for these concepts | MP
1. "nature protection"
2. bias
BLIND REVIEW
1. P.L. rhetoric
Structure: context
Transition: APOV/MP
2. incentive
Structure: MP/APOV
#help #help Can the fact that the second sentence is an illustration of the principle lead one to conclude that it lends some support to the principle or vice versa like AC A suggests?