#feedback this explanation does not do enough to show why it's not C, we're all confused in the comments

JY should call this difference out, that's why I eliminated A too.

this test is so biased against English as a second language folks it's insane

I hate this feature :) they shouldn't be split into two videos

this analysis honestly didn't help me b/c while "frequent" seems a little questionable in C, "likely" feels the same to me in E

this is so true <3

#feedback I'm doing this question as a drill and as a standalone video it's missing a lot. I was trying to get an explanation for q26 but it has all the answers eliminated without showing any of that work

I chose B. The otter pelts were mentioned in that exemption because the courts specifically addressed why they weren't included. I feel like the explanation is assuming that "mentioned" means "included" but I chose B because these handicrafts were explicitly called out in this legislation. The explanation doesn't satisfy my confusion here.

I feel like this lesson has been really contradictory. There are so many example topics about childhood events or shaping events that clearly happened long ago (and this is also explicitly recommended), then it says to not write about the distant past.

There's a whole section about making your language more descriptive and rich (/flowery imo), and then immediately after it says it has to be clear, concise and simple in language. None of the examples from the last section are concise in my opinion.

It talks about the difference between obstacles and disappointments and explicitly says failing a math test is an example of something you shouldn't write about because it's a disappointment, rather than an obstacle. Then it provides an example of a "good" essay about failing a cooking test.

I understand that it's a balancing act, but I honestly came away from this section feeling less informed than before on what makes a good personal statement. Also a big disappointment that most of the example essays linked are behind a pay wall.

Some of these (just copy and pasted from the last page) don't match their headline

Same. He doesn't do a good job of explaining why D is incorrect imo.

can I send my money to u instead of 7S

the bucket thing is making it so much worse for me I cringe when he starts trying to explain it with scoops

I'm confused about this too, he keeps showing us a premise that WOULD be valid at the end, and then says "but you made that up so it's not valid".

???? bro YOU made it up not us

haha I was just being dramatic its not that serious but fr the lasagna example in the comments was way more helpful to me than the video :).

no offense but the lateness example was such trash lol truly the worst way he could've possibly explained this. I'm paying to learn from my friends in the comments at this point