@rmshirk22 I am happy to review your PS. I've found that I'm a much better editor than I am a writer, having just finished my own PS which was an excruciating process! I'd love to have someone on this thread review mine as well, if willing.
... was thinking about starting my PS with a quote as well ... at the heart of my PS with something like "I was ... add some humor into my PS because that's how I ...