Hi! Is anyone willing to look over my scholarship negotiation email? I am in a rather unique situation because I have no counter offers to present so I'm kind of shooting in the dark here since all examples I can find utilize offers from other schools. I know this is untraditional but the school I'm applying to is my alma mater and I am well above both of their medians so I've decided I'll at least try to get my scholarship increased. I would hugely appreciate any advice possible, thank you!!