hey guys. im writing my personal statement and completed my draft.

however, one thing im worried about is the fact that my ps is reading more like "i had these weaknesses--> i reflected on them --> i had a realization and my mindset changed." im afraid that there is a general "lack of action" theme.

im esp concerned about this because of my background (american citizen graduating w a foreign law degree + community college credits) and i feel there is more expected from me. additionally, i also wrote about really small achievements (although that led to my mindset changing). i did show some of my legal thinking though.

do you guys think its ok to have a little bit more of a philosophical personal statement?