If I did this passage by myself, I would definitly take it more as a critique/debate passage. I feel like the MP follows as the author's view the ideas are the important part
I agree to a point, but what is the critique about? The passage really isn't focused on the debate, its focused on Mphahlele and his style and views on writing. However, I'm sure if you approached this using debate you'd still score well.
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these critics are beefing with Mphalele. This doesn't just feel like artistic criticism lol
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If I did this passage by myself, I would definitly take it more as a critique/debate passage. I feel like the MP follows as the author's view the ideas are the important part
@Alyssam
I agree to a point, but what is the critique about? The passage really isn't focused on the debate, its focused on Mphahlele and his style and views on writing. However, I'm sure if you approached this using debate you'd still score well.
@Alyssam can't it be both? perspective style: critique or debate, and engagement style: spotlight?
M-phah-le-le...
M-PA-le-le
(clarifying "ph" is not making an "F" sound)
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