Update: Thanks for your amazing responses, everyone. I’ve been pouring through them, trying to figure out how I would choose from such worthy and gripping accounts, when I finally realized I don’t have to choose. I’m going to change the format instead.
Here’s how it works now: I’ll go through these statements in order, spending five minutes or less with each person. Even in such a small window, I’m optimistic that I’ll be able to dispense some sound advice.
When it’s your turn, I’ll ask you to unmute your mic. Everyone else should stay muted.
I’ll end the webinar after an hour. If someone doesn’t show up, I’ll skip her, so it’s hard to say how far down the list I’ll get.
Talk to you tomorrow.
7Sagers,
This Tuesday, at 9 pm EST, I’ll do a live lightning consultation for one 7Sager.
What’s a lightning consultation? Basically, I’ll try to be as helpful as I can in fifteen to thirty minutes. We might brainstorm personal statement topics, strategize about addenda, or discuss LORs.
If you want a free fifteen- to thirty-minute consultation about your law school application, I’ll need you to post a few things in the comments section:
- Your three-sentence biography.Your biggest worry about your application.Two ideas for your personal statement.
I’ll choose whoever I think will lead to the most interesting consultation, and announce my choice here on Tuesday. When I’m done, I’ll take questions from everyone.
To join, just follow this link: https://global.gotomeeting.com/join/710740293
- Dial +1 (646) 749-3131Use the access code 710-740-293.Use the audio PIN shown after joining the meeting.
We’ll use Citrix GoToMeeting. The meeting ID is 710-740-293.
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Hi David,
Thanks for this great opportunity!
Bio: I am first generation Mexican- American whose only family in the United States consists of my mother and sister. My older sister and I were the first people in our family (we come from a huge family, mom has 10 brothers and sisters) to ever graduate from university. I am extremely passionate about food and want to improve our current food system which is built on the exploitation of humans (mostly undocumented) and animals.
My biggest worry about my application is my GPA since I have 2 "No Passes" from classes I took just for fun (I didn't know these counted as F's btw until after the fact) which brought my cumulative GPA from 3.5 to a 3.24. However, I was approved for testing accommodations for the LSAT. Do you think that if I score a 170 my 3.24 will still make me a very good candidate at my top choice school: UCLA?
My first idea for my personal statement would be about how I came to develop a passion for what we eat (Mom became diabetic and I realized that we live in a culture that does not support our health, we are constantly bombarded with junk food advertising and weight loss pills, Big Ag has taken over leaving farmers with barely enough means to scrape by and the rest of us to figure out what to eat by chasing convenience.
My second idea would be about my Mexican mother coming to this country illegally with not even a dollar to her name, was worked like a slave, mistreated, but then was granted citizenship with farmworker papers and now provides affordable housing to low- income individuals in one of the most affluent cities in the country. She raised two daughters who also developed a passion for social justice and are advocates for positive change.
Even if I don't get chosen, I hope we can email or you can reply to my response. Thanks so much for doing this!
-Stephanie
1) My name is Matthew, I am the youngest of four, whose parents are illiterate and came to America from the Middle East. I was born and raised in a low- income household in an inner city of New York where the public education was horrible and drugs and crime were apparent. At the age of 16, I was diagnosed with epilepsy, which basically has crippled me from doing many things in my life.
2) The biggest worry about my application is my LSAT score.
3) the first idea I have for my personal statement is when I witnessed my cousins murder when I was a kid. The second would be how my disability helped shape who I am as a person.
Wow, I really hope you don’t pick me @davidbusis895.busis . So many wonderful and interesting people and I just want to hear more of their stories.
1) My name is Hakeem Muhammad, i'm from the South Side of Chicago, where I witnessed numerous social ills emanating from gang-violence, the drug economy, and poverty. This inspired for me the desire to change my community and be an advocate of social justice and activism. I have worked in the African-American Male Initiative, taught public speaking and debate at U.C Berkeley/Michigan State debate Camps, and recently delivered a lecture on protest rhetoric at Harvard Debate Council.
2) My LSAT Score, my GPA is solid and I have solid extracurricular activities, just need the lsat score to match.
3 My personal statements will be geared toward public interest/civil rights law: Joining the Urban Debate League in high-school,and becoming a National Champion, defeating elite, more economically prosperous schools, while homeless. (overcoming obstacles stories)
3.5. Lessons I learned working in the african american male initiative helping underprivileged students overcome educational barriers.
1. Bio: Ayesha H. is one of eleven children who grew up on Long Island in New York and is now a single mother of three living in the Bronx. Having held a host of different occupations including stockbroker, theater actress and business manager, Ayesha currently works as a housecleaner while studying for the LSAT and preparing law school applications. Ayesha used to enjoy long walks in the park, however, the rise in police brutality keeps her indoors these days.
2. Biggest Worry: Personal Statement (mainly which subject matter to write about and format - making sure it flows)
3. Ideas for Personal Statement:
The time I became homeless when losing my job as a stockbroker after 9/11, battling depression, starting over which eventually lead to my decision to study the law.
OR
Growing up a muslim, attending a Catholic school and going to a Baptist church on Sundays and how it had bearing on me becoming an atheist as an adult.
(I have more ideas but these are just two)
Thanks so much for your time! This was awesome.
I LOVE this! Good for you all.
Heads up guys, I've changed the format. See the initial post, which I edited. I'll get through as many as I can, but I don't think I'll get to everyone!
We'll do another one, probably August 15—but we didn't record it. :( Sorry!
I am so sad I missed this webinar! Could 7Sage please post this webinar online or someone please post their notes? I don't think these materials is available in the admission package and real examples from fellow 7sagers are really helpful.
Suggestion: Could David be really kind to post his comment to each PS whom he gave advices to? @davidbusis895.busis
Hello,
BIO: I'm a 32 year old single mother to a 6 year old. I have worked in law enforcement for the last 8 years. I have wanted to practice law since I was 11 years old but I have only recently made a decision to follow through.
My biggest worry: My low GPA. I graduated college 10 years ago and was in a completely different frame of mind at that time. I need every other aspect of my application to outshine my GPA.
Personal Statement Ideas: One option is to speak about my transition from law enforcement to pursuing the practice of law and how witnessing police brutality has lit a fire in me to fight for human rights. Another option is to speak about my community service efforts and how dedicated I am to making a difference in lower income areas.
1) Your three-sentence biography.
I'm a 41 year-old former actor with a lifelong passion for environmental issues. I'm currently working as a legal intern, focusing on pro-bono environmental efforts. I have a Certificate in Horticulture from the Brooklyn Botanic Garden, and am about to become a Master Composter through the Master Compost Certificate Program sponsored by the NY Dept. of Sanitation.
1) Your biggest worry about your application.
My biggest concern about my application is my academic/professional record, which I'm afraid won't assure an admissions committee that I can hack the intellectual rigor of law school. I did very well in pretty much all my undergrad academics in terms of GPA, but bounced around undergrad institutions. I transferred from a good liberal arts school after 1.5 years to an acting conservatory (BFA program), then left after two years and finally finished my undergrad degree at a non-highly-rated institution with what looks like a non-rigorous major. Because of my acting transfer credits from the BFA program, I have the unusual distinction of holding a Bachelor of Science in... Liberal Arts (technically my major). My academic grades were always pretty high, my acting grades in the BFA program were all over the place, and again, I did not have what looks like a rigorous major from the institution where I finished undergrad (a B.Sci. with a concentration in 'Visual Studies').
Aside from acting, most of my professional work has been in the service industry (yes, I know this probably goes without saying).
My ideas to counter this potential weakness in academic credentials:
a) Include one or two strong high-level papers written as an undergrad (good idea?)
b) Include an addendum emphasizing my academic marks over my acting marks
c) Hopefully obtain a strong letter of recommendation from my supervisor at the law firm which will emphasize my capacity for the particular demands of legal work.
3) Two ideas for your personal statement.
First Idea: Write about going home for a year to take care of a parent undergoing treatment for brain cancer. This was a transitional experience for me which in many ways initiated my interest in environmental advocacy and law school (essentially: finding my core values, re-connecting with nature in a way I hadn't since childhood, and seeking deeper meaning in my life's work).
Second Idea: Writing about various experiences that led me to understand studying law as a way to make a substantive difference in the world vis-a-vis the environment. These include studying horticulture (the business, ironically, is anything but 'green'), becoming a master composter, and experiences in my day job (running events in NY), where I witnessed a shocking level of waste (and I realized that there needed to be stronger, smarter laws and better enforcement of statutes around recycling).
Somewhere in there I want to talk about a recent experience I had of finding myself stuck with a giant garbage pail of chicken poop, which I simply couldn't throw away (I wouldn't dream of sending all that valuable nitrogen to a landfill). Somehow that moment crystallizes my values and my understanding of my place in the world.
Three Sentence Biography
I grew up in Madison, MS- a high income suburb of Jackson with good schools- and went on to graduate with a BA in English Literature from the University of Southern Mississippi in December 2008, about three months after Lehman Bros declared bankruptcy and the whole world economy and job market went to shit; and so like so many of my friends, I found refuge in the food service industry (With a degree in English this would probably have happened anyway, lol). What was perhaps more surprising is how much I came to love it: I got the opportunity to help develop a concept for a local coffee & lunch spot which really caught on and became a local institution. As I really became a part of it, I fell in love with the little city of Hattiesburg and got to know hundreds of people who composed the bulk of its active community; but as happy as I was there, I never did feel content- I still wanted to do something big, to leave an impact- so I decided to return to school for degrees in law and public policy to position myself to advocate, as best I can, for equal access to quality education.
Application Worry
My biggest worry about my application is my GPA. There is a discrepancy over a class which I dropped but have recently discovered I received a grade which factors into my GPA as an F. The notation for the grade is NA, which I mistakenly assumed meant “not applicable” but which I have now learned means “not attended.” The professor of the class died recently and efforts to correct my transcript have so far been unsuccessful. The correction would bring my GPA from a 3.64 to a 3.75 which seems to make an enormous difference when plugged into a law school calculator.
Personal Statement Idea 1
My time as a professional poker player, and why the greatest single hand of my career was the last hand I ever played. The exact moment I knew I had what it took to really make it, I left it all behind.
Personal Statement Idea 2
My move from a progressive college town to rural North Mississippi, the culture of racial divide I found there, my helplessness to change it, and my conviction to try.
1. My name is Mercedes Landry and I will be a senior at Texas A&M University this fall. I am from Houston, TX. I currently work on campus in the deans office at the Bush School of Government and Public Service.
2. My biggest worry is the LSAT.
3. My two ideas for my personal statement are my co-ed business fraternity, Delta Sigma Pi and how volunteering at the Houston SPCA has made me who I am today.
1) I am a 28 year old mom of 2 boys and I have my Bachelor's Degree from Harding University. Not outstanding although I am involved in my community. I am fluently bilingual in both English & Spanish. I am naturally talented in the arts (singing and playing the cello for weddings/events) and my professional focus is in Real Estate which I believe can provide for a secure future.
2) My Resume
3) I thought about reviewing the struggles that my parents faced in legally immigrating to the US and expound on applying that same commitment to realize a dream to my goal in graduating from law school.
(1) I'm 46 years old mother of four (3 boys, 1 girl) who attended and graduated from Fordham University with 3.2 GPA while working full-time. I've been working in the legal field for approximately 28 years -- beginning first as a secretary and currently as a paralegal manager.
(2) My age and that I have too many directions to go with my personal statement and I may have a hard time reining it in and writing a coherent statement.
(3) (A) My first idea would be to write about beating the odds: from a 16 year runaway, high school drop out to going back to school at age 25 while working full time in a demanding field while being a mom to 3 young kids. I want to show that I can face the law school challenge head on and fulfill my lifelong dream of becoming an attorney.
(B) My second idea would be to talk about raising my three boys whom are biologically all mine, but look completely different from each other (Hispanic, Caucasian and African American) to the outside world and how because of this Ive had to have "the talk" in different ways and raised each a little differently trying to prepare them for a world who may judge them differently because of the color of their skin, both in a good way and a bad way. Then I think I would like to dovetail into another one of my reasons for becoming an attorney (aside from it being life-long dream) and talk about wanting to become a civil rights attorney to hopefully make a difference -- not only by bringing a little justice, but also by educating all races and demonstrating how even though we might be different on the outside, we have more in common than we realize.
Loving these entries!!! Keep em coming and I'm excited to see who David picks :)
Your three-sentence biography. My name is Rosie Basile and I am a Black, Cuban, Irish, and Italian woman from a working class town called Shamokin. I am a first generation college grad who finished college 8 years ago and has spent the last 8 years working in urban charter schools as a teacher, behavior specialist, and dean. My mother and father are the most influential people in my life (ah, what a novel statement!), but it's important to note that my father has a traumatic brain injury and my mother has epilepsy.
Your biggest worry about your application. I am worried about my LSATs in September. I work 60 hours per week and fitting in adequate LSAT prep is challenging, to say the least.
Two ideas for your personal statement. 1) growing up with a father with no executive functioning, short term memory, or impulse control; 2) being recently impelled to consider a career in law after losing two cousins, both of whom were represented by shoddy public defenders.
@davidbusis895.busis how gracious of you to try to help everyone during the session!! I'm slapping myself because I'm not sure how I forgot about logging in?? Thank you for your assistance and I'll definitely be tuned in for the next session!
missed this webinar so sad
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1. Your three-sentence biography:
My name is Yimei Zhang and I am a senior in University of Michigan, Ann Arbor, studying History and Polisci. I was born and raised in China and have been studying in Hong Kong. I speak Cantonese, Mandarin and French.
2. Your biggest worry about your application.
LSAT. My June score was not satisfying despite I felt good with my PTs. I will study heartlessly for September.
3. Two ideas for your personal statement.
a) I have many different working experiences. Walt Disney World in Orlando, Brookings Institution in DC. I have been to 20 countries.
b) I have come a long way since I set my mind to pursue JD degree. I transferred from HK, I chose a major that is difficult for non-native speaker over majors that would be easy for me, I worked in DC for a semester, and I studied French (I want to be an international lawyer).
Thank you, David!
This is a great idea! Looking forward to the session tmr!