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Already thanks to the feedback of some great 7sagers I have rewritten my personal statement. Now I need some feedback on my latest version. Is anyone wanting to do a personal statement swap?

My resume also needs review. I have a science background and currently it contains a lot of jargon. I need to decide what to keep in while not taking away the meaning of an entry. If anyone would like to do a resume swap please let me know.

Thank you 7sage for this kind of group feedback! The discussion board and admissions course has really helped guide me in how to approach applications.

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    nuraldeenb940
    Thursday, Dec 13 2018

    Let's do a personal statement swap!

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    nolangrieves863 OP
    Wednesday, Dec 12 2018

    @umeetsajjan716 awesome will do!

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    jinnylimsoccer979
    Wednesday, Dec 12 2018

    I also have a science background and if you'd like to my resume (filled with research experience + start-up stuff), message me! Would love to swap with you.

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    nolangrieves863 OP
    Wednesday, Dec 12 2018

    @ohnoeshalpme804 and @nuraldeenb940 sounds great! Thank you! I will message you.

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    umeetsajjan716
    Wednesday, Dec 12 2018

    I would be down for a resume swap! I also have a STEM background. I can also give you PS feedback

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    ohnoeshalpme804
    Wednesday, Dec 12 2018

    I can take a look at the PS and resume!

    Generally, jargon is bad for law school admissions. It might be good when you are applying for STEM jobs but definitely not for admissions officers.

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