I just revised [this old chestnut](https://7sage.com/admissions/lesson/how-to-write-an-intro/) and thought I would share it. Here's the gist: you don't have to go for a knockout on your first sentence. It's okay to take it slow. No one will stop reading.
... as planned for me. My first write I got 153 and ... second write I got a 161. My question to the community ... in my application for my first score. The reason for my ... only. For this school my 161 would be slightly above the ...
"Are you in the first generation of your family to ... started undergrad. I was the first person in my family to ... . My undergrad recognized me as first gen but I realize some ...
... my role model, lol). I first took a raw LSAT and ... be possible. It was my first real smack in the face ... time got a 156 (BR 161 - weird). I was a little ...