Hello,
I just went to a pre-law advisor in order to have my essays and resume reviewed. I have done quite extensive research beforehand on how to write them and what to include. The, very nice guy, told me to delete half of my resumé and not to include things like interests, or Dean's list; while sipping coffee from a blue Cooley Law cup. I hoped he would give me some valuable advice, but I have a gut feeling not to follow most of his revisions.
My question is: I only have one more person who can read my essays. Are any of you willing to read and help me proof read them?
English is not my first language and I'm aware I make a lot of mistakes I can't catch myself.